Sunday November 01st 2009, 4:21 PM
Filed under: happy,kids,lessons,other shit,weather


Sunday’s Work

100_2279

Skies slate grey, the breeze not quite crisp

A yard covered with leaves .

I have an itch to be outside.

I grab a rake and find my zone-

the one in which I focus totally

on moving piles.

BeadsĀ  trickle down my back

my hair plastered to my face and neck

I smell of dirt, fresh air and honest sweat

By the time I finish, the sun has broken through

I can finally see the grass and the soil

I will sleep well tonight, satisfied with my efforts.




12 Comments »

  1. Sybil Law said:

    on November 1, 2009 at 5:38 PM

    That does not look like you!
    :P

  2. Metalmom said:

    on November 1, 2009 at 6:03 PM

    SybilLaw-That is my Hubs! I had to rest so I took a picture…it lasts longer. :P

  3. Robin said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 9:56 AM

    Our yard and driveway is so covered in leaves right now you can’t see the ground.

  4. Trukindog said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    wow! Even when you talk about bein sweaty & smellin like dirt you turn me on. Why must you taunt me? :d

    It is a great feeling to get out & work in the yard though isn’t it!

  5. Finn said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    I love fall!

  6. Metalmom said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    Robin-My walk and driveway are the easiest. I can just sweep them up with a broom. But the dog uses the back yard and if I can’t SEE the poop, I can’t CLEAN the poop! :O

  7. Metalmom said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 10:28 AM

    Trukindog-In Catholic school, we were taught to “Tease, never please.Tease, don’t spread the knees!” It is my raison d’etre to taunt you! :))

  8. Metalmom said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 10:30 AM

    Finn-I do love it so, despite all the complaints. Every season has its faults. Spring=allergies, summer=humidity,winter=snow. But the colors and smells of autumn…..Ah…..

  9. Janna said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 7:20 PM

    I’m refusing to rake this big pile
    It goes on at least a few miles
    Burning leaves smell like crap
    Why not go have a nap
    And let my brain recharge awhile?

  10. Metalmom said:

    on November 2, 2009 at 10:22 PM

    Janna-I had forgotten just how funny you can be with your unique verses!! :))

  11. Trukindog said:

    on November 3, 2009 at 6:14 PM

    What the hell has eatin da raisins got to do with you teasin me? :p

  12. Metalmom said:

    on November 3, 2009 at 7:00 PM

    Trukindog-Funny, honey! :))

{ RSS feed for comments on this post} · { TrackBack URI }

Leave a Comment

:) :( :d :"> :(( \:d/ 8-| :o :-" :-w ;) [-( =p~ :-ss =:) :| o:-) :( more »

XHTML: Line-breaks are automatic. Available tags are <a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <strike> <strong>

CommentLuv Enabled